River writing I
the beach sits a few feet above the
waterline, a few hundred years older,
where the river used to scrape
granite boulders into sand
pale as paper and fine,
softened by time and sifted
among roots of yellow pines
above the line of flowing green water
translucent husks from this
season's stoneflies still flutter,
empty-eyed, where the water
runs clear and clean, scouring
soft beaches for the future
between scarred and tree-lined
steeps the river moves still,
moves as it has always moved
its current running in perpetual
motion down slope, written
into rapids and pools and eddies
by the land that contains it
each year inscribed a little deeper
a little narrower, refining the resisting
curves, carving bed and bank,
etching the story of a lifetime
Click on photo to view larger — it's worth it.
17 Comments:
Beautiful poem and excellent picture too
Not something we often think about, the world growing old as we do.
I like how you describe the river scraping, scouring, etching... Beautiful words and photo!
stunning photo!!! this looks like one hard-driving river. my heart beats faster just thinking about it. thank you!
water, etching the story of a lifetime...
so lovely, so rich, this story of never-ending motion and the earth which cradles it. beautiful photography enhanced by beautiful words.
love the shot and knocked out by the words
thank you
They do write their own story. I wonder, in the overall scheme of things, if it's a short story, or a novel? What does that make us?Beautiful!!
She has become a writer, too. Lovely metaphor.
A stunning photograph, and the poem sends me to that beach and ignites my senses.
a current, a flow,
a lifeline (or lifetime)
known only by its traces...
Your poems move me...
words like a charm of enchantment. i love the images they bring to my mind. you have a wonderful way!
great shot, wonderful words!
the landscape looks similar to parts of my country, only there's mostly lime here, hardly any granite...
Cathy, thank you.
Patry, the world around us grows both new and old all the time if we only notice.
Marja-Leena, water is an amazingly destructive and constructive force. Thank you.
Snowsparkle, yes, I took this shot in the heart of the canyon called Impassable Canyon, right in the middle of a rapid. But this is at low water!
Sky, thanks so much. I've been thinking of you.
Floots, thanks. You can see why I respond to your photos of mountains and rivers near you!
Pat, does that leave us as a poem? Thank you!
Mermaid, she is a writer, indeed. Thanks.
Robin Andrea, thanks! It certainly ignites mine!
Chuck, the trace of a lifeline, yes. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Anne, you know these lands, or ones like them. I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem.
Polona, I've thought the same thing, looking at your photographs. There was sedimentary rock, mostly sandstone I think, in other parts of the canyon. Thanks.
mb i love carving bed and bank and all its meanings........you're singing to me again! thank you.
Ruth, thanks for listening!
So lovely even the rhythem of the water gradually wearing away the land
Sue, I like how you described it as a rhythm — it is indeed!
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