Still here
all the breath and all the wind
I have gathered
has not cleared me
of your touch
which reached under my skin
into my blood and bone
where I hold
you, still
close to my heart
curled deep inside me
glimmering
like a sleeping
star
Click on the photo for a larger version. It's better bigger.
posted by MB at 8:33 PM
21 Comments:
this is really good! the photo fits so well, too.
Just exquisite--the poem, the photo--cutting deeply and delicately...the most beautiful snow picture I have seen!
gorgeous
sleeping star is a great image
Phew, a third time would be just too much. Beautiful stuff, mb - word and pic.
there isn't enough wind in the world for me and mine. lovely - that ice reaching out to go with the water.
Love is in the air!! As beautiful a love poem as ever I've read. The picture is great, even if it is of that snow and ice.
I had a differrent reaction than Pat's. I ached when I read this, seeing a loss of the loved one with only the memory of touch curled like a sleeping star...a little gem of a poem and another of a photo.
exquisite, both photo and words.
i feel a loss while reading this...
Wow!!!
Now, see, I thought it was the cold wind curled deep, glimmering.
Very nice!
Tank you.
"all the breath and all the wind
I have gathered
has not cleared me
of your touch"
sometimes the ache never leaves...
very beautiful, both pic and poem
The picture is too good. The words go so wrll with it.
Some things cannot be blocked, even by Mother Nature. Thank you for the touch, the reminder.
Yes. Thank you. I have someone like that in my heart, "glimmering like a sleeping star." Joyce
hi mb, i think everyone here has said it better than i can.... most especially firebird! love it!
ahhhhhhhhh! I am sighing!
So lyrical! Thank you for sharing this.
" Still here "
Et même à Toulouse aujourd'hui !!
Je vous souhaite de faire de belles photos !
Exactly the way your words reach inside me...
alan
I agree with Alan. Your words are a sleeping star.
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