Saturday, January 20, 2007

Still here

all the breath and all the wind
I have gathered
has not cleared me
of your touch

which reached under my skin
into my blood and bone
where I hold

you, still
close to my heart
curled deep inside me

like a sleeping

Click on the photo for a larger version. It's better bigger.


Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

this is really good! the photo fits so well, too.

1/20/2007 9:35 PM  
Blogger firebird said...

Just exquisite--the poem, the photo--cutting deeply and delicately...the most beautiful snow picture I have seen!

1/20/2007 9:46 PM  
Blogger floots said...

sleeping star is a great image

1/21/2007 12:37 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Phew, a third time would be just too much. Beautiful stuff, mb - word and pic.

1/21/2007 2:58 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

there isn't enough wind in the world for me and mine. lovely - that ice reaching out to go with the water.

1/21/2007 3:47 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Love is in the air!! As beautiful a love poem as ever I've read. The picture is great, even if it is of that snow and ice.

1/21/2007 5:45 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I had a differrent reaction than Pat's. I ached when I read this, seeing a loss of the loved one with only the memory of touch curled like a sleeping star...a little gem of a poem and another of a photo.

1/21/2007 6:43 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

exquisite, both photo and words.
i feel a loss while reading this...

1/21/2007 10:48 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...


1/21/2007 3:29 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Now, see, I thought it was the cold wind curled deep, glimmering.

1/22/2007 2:50 AM  
Blogger david santos said...

Very nice!
Tank you.

1/22/2007 5:31 AM  
Blogger Brood Mode said...

"all the breath and all the wind
I have gathered
has not cleared me
of your touch"

sometimes the ache never leaves...

very beautiful, both pic and poem

1/22/2007 7:48 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

The picture is too good. The words go so wrll with it.

1/22/2007 11:12 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Some things cannot be blocked, even by Mother Nature. Thank you for the touch, the reminder.

1/22/2007 3:03 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Yes. Thank you. I have someone like that in my heart, "glimmering like a sleeping star." Joyce

1/22/2007 5:27 PM  
Blogger snowsparkle said...

hi mb, i think everyone here has said it better than i can.... most especially firebird! love it!

1/22/2007 6:19 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

ahhhhhhhhh! I am sighing!

1/23/2007 12:32 PM  
Blogger Bitterroot said...

So lyrical! Thank you for sharing this.

1/24/2007 4:53 AM  
Blogger Jean said...

" Still here "
Et même à Toulouse aujourd'hui !!
Je vous souhaite de faire de belles photos !

1/24/2007 5:13 AM  
Blogger la vie en rose said...

'like a sleeping star'...mmmmm....i love that....

1/25/2007 11:45 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Exactly the way your words reach inside me...


1/25/2007 12:43 PM  
Blogger Patry Francis said...

I agree with Alan. Your words are a sleeping star.

1/27/2007 9:26 PM  

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