If you really want to know
Make no bones about it, you are more than
Rubbing elbows, more than shoulder to shoulder.
You’re in the blood, after all, in the flesh, in the
Same breath, joined at the hip, body and soul.
So move in close, as close as you can get,
Put your back into it, get under that skin,
Straight to the bone, touch the nerve, until
You are the blood from the stone,
Until you are the sweat that pearls your skin. Now
Open your innermost ear and ask what
Your bones have to say about the truth.
25 Comments:
It ain't no sin
To take off your skin
And dance around in your bones!
Thought provoking poem and photo, MB.
Just curious - what animal skeleton is it - a horse, maybe?
Anonypoet, ain't that the truth!
M-L, I believe it was an elk. The photo's actually from last fall.
And the mirror, it reflects a tiny dancing skeleton
Surrounded by a fleshy overcoat and swaddled in
-John Linnell.
You are a potent poet.
Zhoen, nothing's gonna change my clothes? (Wasn't there a John Linell who was a friend of Wm Blake?)
Wow. It such a huge pleasure to have you back.
wow. powerful words and photo.
good to read you again
Wow!!
these bones tell me that we are the only creatures on Earth that can reflect upon our own being, our own bodies. At least it seems that way....Great poem.
I love the earthiness--and the body-ness--of this one. And, yes, I feel it in my bones. Blessings, PaL
There is nothing more compelling than contemplating our own bones, the things that outlast the flesh, and even the fire.
as i read this, i got goosebumps it was so good. wow! mb, you never cease to amaze me. what a stunning poem. thank you! big hugs, snowsparkle
MB, yes, and yes.
The carnival is up at http://knockingfrominside.blogspot.com/2007/08/ringing-of-bards-life-death-and-god.html
Thanks for your contribution!
that's a really interesting poem.
i love this line: Until you are the sweat that pearls your skin
sweat as pearl; sweet metaphor!
peace
i really want to know
This poem feels as if it wants to give you something difficult to do. Powerful!
excellent poem...great photo pairing.
I love the last three lines especially. You are a wonderful poet. (And I bought a digicamera today and managed to post a photograph. Thank you for your inspiration for same.)
I am. I am. Thank you for eloquently asking others and yourself to do the same.
WOW!!!! Never thought about asking the bones.
Cool,,,very cool....you got right to the marrow with this!
gritty and lovely, thank you
Welcome to new and old, and thank you for all the thoughtful comments.
ooooh, yeah....
so raw and true. are we brave enough?
i think yes....
thank you for posting!
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