30-2
Toes
dug into
the cooling sand,
heads
thrown back,
we gazed at
the
limitless pinpoint
stars above. "I've
never
seen one
fall," she confessed.
We
sat, astonished,
in the darkness.
dug into
the cooling sand,
heads
thrown back,
we gazed at
the
limitless pinpoint
stars above. "I've
never
seen one
fall," she confessed.
We
sat, astonished,
in the darkness.
posted by MB at 12:43 PM
6 Comments:
Astonishment.
I love this. So deft.
these 30 words and the images they create leave me hoping i ,too, will one day see my own first falling star.
I like the suspense in this story...it's simple, and rich...
Perfect!
Just moments before I read this post I was watching the eclipse and was delighted to see a falling star.
A hay(na)ku. Oh. And a beautifully satisfying one. So wonderful to have you back with some of your dancing words and gorgeous photos.
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