30-6
He
held her
word still on
his
tongue, like
a pearl cradled
in
moist muscle,
feeling her meaning
and
intent radiate
in the darkness
of
his mouth.
And then swallowed.
held her
word still on
his
tongue, like
a pearl cradled
in
moist muscle,
feeling her meaning
and
intent radiate
in the darkness
of
his mouth.
And then swallowed.
posted by MB at 7:03 AM
10 Comments:
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I
like this
very very much.
so good to find surprises here again!
:-)
Suhweeeet.
Oh, oh, this is really wonderful! I like hay(na)ku a lot. Don't think I have ever seen the form used more perfectly than this.
Hey! glad to see ya back. What a wonderful way to ingest a thought.
Beautiful!!!
This 30- series is great. Keep going! You found something!
very powerful words ... and welcome back!
Well done! I can feel myself going through the motion as I read this... the pearl creates a lump in my throat.
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