Friday, June 27, 2008



suddenly we remember what they are —
shooting stars
littering the bright valley floor,
fallen in pink and purple pools,
their brilliance competing with the snowy peaks,
still blown-back, nodding, bobbing

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Blogger Dale said...

Oh, lovely sequence of alliteration. I love how you soften from 'b's to 'p's in the last line.

6/27/2008 10:43 AM  
Blogger Dale said...

oops. the other way around, I meant, of course. 'p's to 'b's.

6/27/2008 10:45 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice sketch!

6/27/2008 11:40 AM  
Blogger Sky said...

beautiful. MB. i would love to have some shooting stars in our gardens!

6/28/2008 3:17 AM  
Blogger MB said...

Dale, Dave, thanks.

Sky, me too. Too bad wildflowers don't transplant more easily.

7/03/2008 10:30 AM  

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