Sunday, February 19, 2006

Battle of the bands

In response to Tom Montag and his "Lines for February 19" - go check out the original!

Left. Left.
Left. Left.

Right. Left.
Right. Left.
Right. Left. Left.

Right. Left. Left.
Right. Left. Left.
Sun.

Right. Right.
Right. Right.
Sun. Cloud. Cloud.

Sun. Left. Right.
Sun. Cloud. Cloud.

Sun.

7 Comments:

Blogger Brenda said...

Oh, this was fun!

2/19/2006 6:51 PM  
Blogger Patry Francis said...

I'm glad the sun won!

2/19/2006 8:54 PM  
Blogger alan said...

:o)

alan

2/20/2006 12:49 AM  
Blogger zhoen said...

Now, see, I was hearing marching cadences. March, not February.

2/20/2006 7:42 AM  
Blogger Mary said...

:-)

2/20/2006 11:18 AM  
Blogger mermaid said...

I was marching with this, replacing clouds and sun with Winter and Spring.

2/20/2006 5:29 PM  
Blogger MB said...

Tom and I had fun discussing the rhythmic possibilities of his poem. I'm glad you all enjoyed the result of our conversation!

2/21/2006 5:29 PM  

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