Battle of the bands
In response to Tom Montag and his "Lines for February 19" - go check out the original!
Left. Left.
Left. Left.
Right. Left.
Right. Left.
Right. Left. Left.
Right. Left. Left.
Right. Left. Left.
Sun.
Right. Right.
Right. Right.
Sun. Cloud. Cloud.
Sun. Left. Right.
Sun. Cloud. Cloud.
Sun.
Left. Left.
Left. Left.
Right. Left.
Right. Left.
Right. Left. Left.
Right. Left. Left.
Right. Left. Left.
Sun.
Right. Right.
Right. Right.
Sun. Cloud. Cloud.
Sun. Left. Right.
Sun. Cloud. Cloud.
Sun.
posted by MB at 2:38 PM
7 Comments:
Oh, this was fun!
I'm glad the sun won!
:o)
alan
Now, see, I was hearing marching cadences. March, not February.
:-)
I was marching with this, replacing clouds and sun with Winter and Spring.
Tom and I had fun discussing the rhythmic possibilities of his poem. I'm glad you all enjoyed the result of our conversation!
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