Tuesday, June 20, 2006

Thinking

the scent that gathers
in the kitchen air

the feel of cream
across my lips

the bittersweet taste
of mocha on my tongue

I could drink
a cup of you

17 Comments:

Blogger la vie en rose said...

*sigh*

6/20/2006 11:49 AM  
Blogger Dale said...

It must be summer. Between "Like That" and this poem... I don't know, is it getting hot in here?

6/20/2006 2:39 PM  
Blogger Brenda said...

Sounds like you're in love, love. :)

6/20/2006 6:52 PM  
Blogger Endment said...

yummy - guess I will go see what is available down in the kitchen :)

6/20/2006 7:22 PM  
Blogger leslee said...

:-)

6/20/2006 7:23 PM  
Blogger gracie said...

mmmmm....

6/20/2006 10:01 PM  
Blogger MB said...

Michelle, thanks.

Dale, it's a hot beverage when you think about it.

Brenda, in love with love as always, love. ;-)

Endment, I recommend it!

Leslee and Gracie, thanks for your comments.

6/21/2006 8:33 AM  
Blogger snowsparkle said...

this reminds me of one of my favorite Joni Mitchell songs with the refrain: "you are in my blood like holy wine. you're so bitter, but you're sweet. oh, i could drink a case of you, and still i'd be on my feet, i would still be on my feet."

thanks for the reminder and the accompaniment as i sip my first morning cup of cafe au lait!

6/21/2006 8:38 AM  
Blogger MB said...

Snowsparkle, I did a doubletake while reading my own poem immediately after writing it because that very song came to mind... and I wondered for a moment if I'd written down her words! I had to look up the lyrics to get them straight. Savor your morning cup, my friend!

6/21/2006 8:45 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

MB, I'm a sucker for good love poems, and this certainly hooked me!!

6/21/2006 8:01 PM  
Blogger Lee said...

Mmmm...think I'll go and give my wife a hug.

6/22/2006 3:57 AM  
Blogger Jean said...

"I could drink
a cup of you "

J'adore !!!Splendide !

6/22/2006 9:35 AM  
Blogger mermaid said...

Like the ambiguity of 'you'.

6/22/2006 1:40 PM  
Blogger MB said...

Pat, thanks for stopping by. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

Lee, you are funny. Thanks.

Jean, je suis heureuse que ce poeme vous plait tellement.

Mermaid, thank you.

6/22/2006 3:25 PM  
Blogger ruth said...

ditto snowsparkle about Joni, my favourite songstress and poetess and my favourite song of hers and, of her songs, my favourite line!
'I am in your blood like holy wine' - she is in yours (clearly) and mine and we are in hers and...well, the rest is a bit corny so i won't say it because it has all been said before, (and can never be said enough) but i'm sure you know what i mean by eternal truths.

6/25/2006 1:54 PM  
Blogger Frankie said...

This is so soulful. I really love it. "I could drink a cup of you" is genius. I think it says it all. Thanks so very much for this!

7/01/2006 11:46 AM  
Blogger MB said...

Ah, Ruth, thank you. I do understand what you mean.

Frankie, thanks for your kind words. It's wonderful to see you here again.

7/16/2006 1:27 PM  

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