Still light
sparks fly
through my dreams
smoky air
keeps the
light golden
your touch left
a trace of phosphorescence
on my skin in
glowing blue lines
that don't fade
in dusky light
through my dreams
smoky air
keeps the
light golden
your touch left
a trace of phosphorescence
on my skin in
glowing blue lines
that don't fade
in dusky light
posted by MB at 9:59 AM
18 Comments:
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Nice!
The powdery purply-blue of ripening plums that disappears when you pick them and rub them is here for me, only it doesn't disappear into the glossy sheen of the plum's skin but marvelously remains, a "phosphorescence" of "glowing blue lines /that don't fade."
very pretty very pretty.
Yow.
Chill bumps from this one.
Whew, need to go calm down now.
(P.S. -- Thanks tons for your high-sign about The Festival of the Trees -- and for the neighborly comment while my 'puter was puny.)
Who needs pics when you have great words!
mmmmm :)
" your touch left
a trace of phosphorescence
on my skin in
glowing blue lines...."
Quelles belles images si vivantes , si colorées , si expressives !
Je vous souhaite une rentrée remplie de bonheur .
beautiful words, so sensual...
(thanks for coming by my photo blog)
the sensuality of your life is alive in your words...always.
I love the phosphorescent trace. Nice image.
another lovely "keeper"
How beautifully you put feelings into tangable words.
I have worried about all the smoke and you lately...
alan
If I close my eyes, the fireworks are distant but still touching a woman in time.
Wow!! Some kind of touch!!! Gives me shivers in Georgia!!
Dale, thank you.
RDL, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Brenda, I enjoyed your analogy to plums. Thanks.
Zhoen, yes it was!
Lori, thanks for your response! I loved your contributions to the Festival of the Trees.
John, welcome! That's quite something for a photographer to say — thank you very much.
Floots, mm-hm. :)
Jean, merci beaucoups! Je suis tellement heureuse a votre retour. Vous m'avez manquees votres photos.
Polona, welcome! I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem.
Sky, thanks for your insight.
Leslee, I did too. Thank you.
Endment, thank you for your kind words.
Alan, it's not pleasant, but please don't worry because it's really okay. Thank you, though. Your kindness touches me.
Mermaid, I'm glad you understood.
Pat, sorry for the unexpected cold front! Thanks!
Wonderful I feel warmer now
Sue, thank you.
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