Thursday, October 12, 2006

Rain


















the moon was nearly half gone
this afternoon
sliding between two trees
as if out looking

is it true the leaves don't
want to fall?

it begins to rain

scent of remembering
sound of a forgotten music
falling through the leaves
onto my wet cheek


This is a manipulation of a stock photo. Click to view larger.

19 Comments:

Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Fantastic photograph!! I love the question. Opens up several avenues to ponder through. One, is it rain or tears? Excellent poem!!!

10/12/2006 9:40 AM  
Blogger la vie en rose said...

wow, Wow, WOW...your words leave me speechless...

10/12/2006 11:24 AM  
Blogger charlie said...

Love it MB

10/12/2006 1:08 PM  
Blogger polona said...

oh, this is wonderful, mb!

10/12/2006 2:02 PM  
Blogger Sky said...

oh, yes...captivating.

10/12/2006 2:55 PM  
Anonymous marja-leena said...

I love this - both the words and the photo are magical.

10/12/2006 4:41 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

nicely done. I like the moon out looking. Salting this year's perch catch is almost done.

10/12/2006 8:47 PM  
Blogger kathy said...

beautiful! kinda sad feeling i feel when reading it.

10/12/2006 10:00 PM  
Anonymous sfl94 said...

Very nice picture.
Have a nice week-end
Bye
S├ębastien

10/13/2006 12:19 AM  
Blogger narrator said...

the music of rain is one of my favorite topics, and you have worked it beautifully...

10/13/2006 7:11 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

MB, I think the lines:

is it true the leaves don't
want to fall?


are so wonderful, such a captivating image, they could also stand on their own.

thanks for a thought that will carry me through weeks of autumn to come.

10/13/2006 4:55 PM  
Blogger Lori Witzel said...

Still tuckered out (it will take a few days to recoup I'm sure) but am back, and all's fine...including this poem.

That ol' moon.

:-)

10/13/2006 8:56 PM  
Blogger Mary said...

(o)

10/13/2006 9:19 PM  
Blogger EATING POETRY said...

beautiful imagery. I love the personification of the moon.

10/14/2006 7:43 PM  
Blogger MB said...

Thanks, all. Your comments are each appreciated very much.

10/15/2006 8:56 PM  
Blogger Tongue in Cheek Antiques said...

this photo!! and the river below...perfect!!

10/16/2006 7:32 AM  
Blogger MB said...

I'm glad you enjoyed them, Corey!

10/16/2006 12:43 PM  
Blogger Sue hardy-Dawson said...

I alays think trees look a little sad when the leaves fall off them, kind like my dog after a haircut,just slightly ashamed-gorgeous pic and words

10/17/2006 11:25 AM  
Blogger MB said...

Sue, I guess a new look takes some adjustment!

10/17/2006 8:26 PM  

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