Monday, October 09, 2006

River writing II


















a long braided stream
life etches dreams and losses
deep into my bones


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11 Comments:

Blogger polona said...

spectacular!

10/09/2006 2:58 PM  
Blogger rdl said...

love it!!

10/09/2006 3:20 PM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Like well worn hieroglyphs, you have to find the Rosetta bone to tell which is which. Love the thought of a "braided stream"!!

10/09/2006 3:48 PM  
Blogger zhoen said...

(oooooooooooo)

10/09/2006 4:09 PM  
Blogger Brenda said...

Braids and bones and streams and dreams and losses... you sure pack a lot in a few simple lines. A haiku of the life journey...

10/09/2006 6:05 PM  
Blogger Tongue in Cheek Antiques said...

like a healing balm, the river runs singing it song...lucky we are that you have listened to it given us its message...you words soothe

10/10/2006 8:12 AM  
Blogger floots said...

another goodie
i like both treatments

10/10/2006 11:05 AM  
Blogger la vie en rose said...

short and sweet and powerful

10/10/2006 1:14 PM  
Blogger mermaid said...

A recorded history in landscape. Love it.

10/10/2006 3:10 PM  
Blogger Bitterroot said...

Am really enjoying your Salmon River photos and poetry. I floated that river a couple of summers ago and it is still in my heart.

10/11/2006 12:26 PM  
Blogger MB said...

Polona and rdl, I'm glad you both enjoyed this.

Pat, the "Rosetta bone" made me laugh, thanks.

Zhoen, ooooh.

Brenda, there is so much to pack in one can't even begin to do justice. Sometimes simpler is easier that way! Thank you.

Corey, everyone needs a balm for the soul, I guess.

Floots, they're different, but related.

Michelle, it's one of the reasons I'm drawn to the haiku form, I guess. The challenge of trying to pack a universe into a few lines.

Mermaid, we are not that far from the land.

Bitterroot, thanks for stopping by. It's a memorable place, as you know.

10/12/2006 5:16 PM  

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