Of owls
beneath skies of lavender and amber —
colors of changing season and day —
I walk under a black locust tree
and crane my head to see
in the dusky light
the cream-colored pantaloons
of a great horned owl
perched, unmoving,
on the still leafless branch above
I look this great bird in its
startling yellow eyes,
and from within its cupped face
it looks back, unruffled,
until suddenly it turns, calls,
raises up on well-dressed legs,
tracking with particular focus
the arrival of another owl
landing on a far, outstretched limb
they converse in a series of postures,
turnings of the head, standing up and down,
slight wing gestures, tossing out
rapid-fire staccato call and response,
until she glides off into the smell of coming rain
in dreams I fly with owls in a darkening sky
we call to one another through the purple air,
speaking of the things we know,
of our love for each other and for the world —
isn't this the way it should be?
Photo by Michael McDowell
19 Comments:
I love the way this turns from a walk into a dance of owls into a dream flying with them witnessing the world...
Thank you for the poem, you leave me in tears.
I am most honored.
Your dreams so beautiful
your voice so exquisite
your soul so wondrous
my heart aches
as I read your words.
alan
MB,
The owl communication was evoked beautifully. Wonderful sentiment, as well. If only life could be so pure and simple...
Yes.
breathtakingly beautiful... your words, the image. wow!!! love this one mb!!! thanks!
Another great one!
... that last verse, wow! Well all of it, but that last verse in particular. Thanks mb.
Loved, loved, loved the last verse. When you become one with them, it's hard to believe you both are that different.
So beautiful, MB. A wondrous experience so lovingly portrayed in this poem. I love your dream. We could dream that dream together.
Thank you all for your thoughtful comments. I enjoyed each one.
perfectly gorgeous. i'm an owl fan too - this held lots of meaning for me.
what an absolutely perfect poem MB. Really and truly amazing. I love the image of us speaking through the purple air. SO fabulous!
Anne and Frankie, thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
A poem like this makes me wish I witnessed the scene myself, just for half a second, until I realize that I just did. Thanks for taking me there.
This is breath taking I so so enjoyed it
Wenda, it was an incredible moment to witness. I'm glad you felt like you were there, too.
Sue, thanks for letting me know you did!
mb oh mb you write SO beautifully! I needed this thismorning as I am getting into writing my book (have a deadline with possible agent next month) and it is as if you are detoxifying me as I read. Thank you for the gifts. I don't come here often enough but when I do I drink thirstily from your spring.
Ruth, what a gift your comment is. (Exciting about the book!)
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