Wild yard
with each pass, the grass
gets shorter under whirring blades
and my sweat gathers
in the robust sun
small birds linger and,
despite the whickering noises
of the push mower,
rush in as I turn my back, looking
for dandelion seeds and
long bits to fortify nests
at the back of the yard, floating
on top of the still-long grass
in the shade of the box elder,
long and worn, barred
with red and black and
tipped in cream,
a single hawk's feather
gets shorter under whirring blades
and my sweat gathers
in the robust sun
small birds linger and,
despite the whickering noises
of the push mower,
rush in as I turn my back, looking
for dandelion seeds and
long bits to fortify nests
at the back of the yard, floating
on top of the still-long grass
in the shade of the box elder,
long and worn, barred
with red and black and
tipped in cream,
a single hawk's feather
13 Comments:
To meditate on such details is to see everything.
Very nice! If I hadn't just quoted you in my smorgasblog, I'd snip from this.
Darn cool -- when I had more time, I loved to mow. Love the hawk feather.
Now, re: other bird feathers being left by the cosmos, see
http://chatoyance.blogspot.com/
2005/12/x-marked.html
Mermaid, it always seems to me there is more to see, and more, and more. I can't stop looking.
Thanks, Dave. Hey — I saw another dogwood today! Still eating my words. Not the first time, of course.
Lori, thanks, that one really makes me smile. X marks the spot of your poem, perhaps!
All those things that catch your attention while you are mowing the lawn. What an interesting juxtaposition, noticing the wildness, while you tame the lawn.
Robin, exactly! I never cease to be amazed by the wildness I find in town.
Nice. I like how this begins with the suburban lawn and gets increasingly wilder as it goes on. (And of course I am jealous of the robust sun!)
Leslee, thanks. Even in the city, we're just whacking back against determined wildness. It's hotter here than I'm ready for! Stay warm and dry!
I'm not much of a mower, and have always had places without grass, except in Vancouver, which was hard to mow, since I'd have preferred to let it go wild. I like the juxtapositions here, and the shiver I get from the single hawk's feather floating...
Brenda, as you might guess from the end of this poem, my grass tends to be hard to mow, too!
Silvermoon, thank you. I'm glad you felt it!
this is so vivid it's like a picture, I enjoyed it so much thank-you
i can smell the grass - that tangy green fragrance that always takes me back to my childhood...and feel the sun hot on the part in my hair. fallen hawk feather eh? a gift? i'm just back from 10 days in yellowstone and am all apart. can't wait to catch up here.
Thank you, Sue!
Anne, yes, a gift! I wondered where you were. Welcome home! Glad to have you back.
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