:: a few feathers dropped ::
posted by MB at 9:03 AM
i love this. for reasons i am only discovering.
yes...and that is enoughthe beautiful yet deep simplicity of this one is so amazing. one of my favorites...
MB, sounds like the perfect nowhere to be!!
What a hopeful poem.
Methinks you breathe it out, too.
truly, that's what it's all about, and no other reason, I agree...
hear hear sister!
Yes, true enough.
Such a nice haiku, like a magical small room that grows infinitely large as you enter and walk through it...
wow.seriously moving.thank you.
mbthree short lines and i'm undone... i'm so glad you're back! for so many reasons... thanks for your words.
A bit behind...I always felt this trail led everywhere (that matters)!alan
I agree with J. cosmo. Thanks, MB.
I think I'm going nowhere. So what? You make me believe that all there is is now.
Thanks, all.J Cosmo and Patry... the in and the out breaths work together, and one does not work without the other.
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