Thick with wings
I watched the yearning creek run,
the land lying damp and still
under a dull sky, and stepped softly
across the leaf-strewn earth.
Two winter-bleached trees
were suddenly thick with wings,
as if leafed out in a
shimmering Spring,
and they were singing —
a flock of red-wing blackbirds
filled the baskets
of their bony branches
and the chorus of reedy, raucous,
red-shouldered joy
seemed to call the sun
out from the shrouded sky —
slanting, glorious, brilliant rays shot
from behind the blues and greys,
and all things — the wet stones,
the bark, the flattened grasses,
the wide sky itself —
on an otherwise heartless late winter day,
were torched with golden fire
and for a moment the world sang.
the land lying damp and still
under a dull sky, and stepped softly
across the leaf-strewn earth.
Two winter-bleached trees
were suddenly thick with wings,
as if leafed out in a
shimmering Spring,
and they were singing —
a flock of red-wing blackbirds
filled the baskets
of their bony branches
and the chorus of reedy, raucous,
red-shouldered joy
seemed to call the sun
out from the shrouded sky —
slanting, glorious, brilliant rays shot
from behind the blues and greys,
and all things — the wet stones,
the bark, the flattened grasses,
the wide sky itself —
on an otherwise heartless late winter day,
were torched with golden fire
and for a moment the world sang.
16 Comments:
my world just sang with a varied thrush and her lover! aren't these days magical when, eager for spring, we are sensitive to every gift of nature?
lovely.
Thank you for this.
How did you become brave enough to write poetry? I find it takes guts in a way no prose demands. Great work ...
What lovely imagery!
full of longing - gorgeous!
Sky, sensitive... or something!
Dale, I'm glad you got something from it.
Becca, I don't really know the answer to your question. There was a kind of courage it required of me, but now I think it requires more faith and humility. And for me it goes beyond all those into need in a way that now makes the courage relatively irrelevant. If any of that makes sense. And then there is how I've written poetry since before I can remember. Sorry I'm not more articulate about this. It feels more familiar to me than prose.
Endment, and Anne, thank you.
Becca, I'd like to add what I've said before: I don't for a moment consider anything posted here a polished poem. This blog is an exercise for me in poetic fluency. Write and post, write and post, near daily, don't look back. That's it.
Hi MB- I love this kind of exuberant poem, which rises out of itself with such joy. I don't need to try to write poetry anymore. You write what I would if I could. I wonder if I'll ever write again. Maybe. Maybe not.
David, I'm grateful you liked the poem. But if we all acted upon such feelings as you express about not writing, there would not be enough poems or music in this world...and I wouldn't be writing poetry either. I have a feeling that you have a need to write not unlike mine. Write.
Beautiful...
As must be the person who can reach inside me with words...
thank you!
alan
This poem, an utter gift at this late Winter season, the stream and soil and the light at the end is like a full illumination of the reason for everything.
Votre poème est une vraie peinture !
Images , couleurs , chant des oiseaux .
Une peinture animée et musicale !
Alan, the way you respond says a lot about what's inside you.
Brenda, the moment was a gift.
Jean, merci. J'avais l'impression d'etre dedans une peinture, a ce moment-la.
How do you do this???
MB,
Beautifully written. The images are so strong and solid. A perfect snapshot.
Mermaid, Firehawk: Thank you!
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