The songwriter's art
in the swirl and rush of the multitude
you drew me aside to a quiet corner
by the stair and standing by the pile of shoes
played a new song of someone's love and peaches
leaning my ear close I faced the din
while the song drew me in
through a window of words
framed by melody to your small kitchen
an apparition of your redhaired wife
standing at the sink in a cloud of steam
hands wrapped by cotton towels, funneling
peaches into another glass jar
and you with your large hands
standing behind, reaching out
and the jolt of surprising love
the sound of hot glass breaking
the kitchen floor covered in glass
and summer peaches and laughter
and hot kisses rising like steam
the thread of melody weaving through
then the sound stopped, the last chord
drained away, my ears filled again
with the chatter of the crowd
and my eyes with this wide white room
I looked down and saw
your large hands resting on the silent guitar
Photo found at pickyourown.org.
8 Comments:
and yet another very nice one!
love your imagery...vivid, measured, drawing me in until I'm sitting there on a stair hearing it too. thanks! snowsparkle
I have goosebumps all over.
I can smell the hot peaches.
So beautiful, so strong. I think it's in the hands. :)
RDL, thank you for your kind words and for coming by to read.
snowsparkle, welcome! I'm glad you stopped by. I appreciate especially your comment that the poem felt measured to you since I was a bit afraid I was taking things too quickly.
{{zhoenw}} thanks.
Mary, I could too! It was wonderful.
broken ladder, welcome! I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem.
Sara, you got it. It was all the multiple magic of those hands. :-)
The sence of itimacy draws me in, you have illuminated these quite ordinary things and made them special as you veiw them
Thank you, Sue, your comment means a lot to me.
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