Wednesday, March 08, 2006

Enigma

a moment with you is
like a moment with
a rare, wild thing
untouchable
unknowable
delight

you take my hand to
lead me through
a rich meadow where
my eyes, my heart
feast on every
flower, every grass
every
word

with you

13 Comments:

Blogger alan said...

So many words I've tried; none seem right except-

Wow!

alan

3/08/2006 12:18 PM  
Blogger mermaid said...

The image of a new meadow is so exciting and peaceful at the same time. Does that make any sense?

A new landscape. Simply wonderful.

3/08/2006 1:23 PM  
Blogger Rexroth's Daughter said...

Sounds so much like love.

3/08/2006 2:10 PM  
Blogger zhoen said...

(o)

3/08/2006 4:05 PM  
Anonymous yllstonewolf said...

so completely, simply lovely!

3/08/2006 4:15 PM  
Blogger snowsparkle said...

this seems a quintessential love poem... so nice to see it written. so few words, so much power... thanks!

3/08/2006 8:22 PM  
Blogger Endment said...

Somehow you have caught the essence of relationship.

3/09/2006 5:08 AM  
Blogger Firehawk said...

MB,

Like exhaling the sweet breath of a new Spring and running a hand through the first flowers.

3/09/2006 11:50 AM  
Blogger Brenda said...

No-one writes about love like you do. The essence of everything is here.

3/09/2006 5:09 PM  
Blogger Jean said...

Enigma ...
Un moment avec vous
est comme un moment
avec une chose rare
intouchable ,
inconnaissable
plaisir

Prennez ma main
menez moi
à travers une prairie
où mon coeur ,
vibre
sur chaque fleur ,
chaque herbe,
chaque mot

avec vous

3/10/2006 1:30 PM  
Blogger MB said...

Jean:
vibre ou... festoie (pas une expression idiomatique en francais? une fete ou un festin pour les yeux?) ... ou bien, peut-etre, se nourrit...

3/10/2006 1:39 PM  
Blogger rdl said...

very nice!

3/11/2006 5:40 PM  
Blogger MB said...

Thanks, rdl!

3/16/2006 11:41 AM  

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