Wednesday, March 15, 2006

Haiku

tiny white doves fall
slowly from the heavy sky
wings melt on my skin

17 Comments:

Blogger alan said...

:o)

alan

3/15/2006 9:31 AM  
Blogger mermaid said...

Wings and skin are one.

3/15/2006 9:35 AM  
Blogger Lhombre said...

hi
coo
azulej
ooo

3/15/2006 10:07 AM  
Blogger Rexroth's Daughter said...

How much like snow your doves are. So beautiful.

3/15/2006 10:35 AM  
Blogger MB said...

Alan... :-)

Mermaid, oh! That's very nice.

Lhombre... que chistoso y ingenioso! Me hace reir!

RD, yes, still snowing here. Sigh. Not for long though, not for long...

3/15/2006 1:08 PM  
Blogger Brenda said...

That is one of the most beautiful haikus I've read in a long time.

3/15/2006 6:40 PM  
Blogger Endment said...

This is really meaningful today

snowflakes falling and doves cooing

delightful haiku

3/15/2006 7:08 PM  
Blogger rdl said...

very nice

3/15/2006 7:54 PM  
Blogger MB said...

Brenda, Endment, rdl, thank you. The image came to me because there is a great flock of doves that resides near my house... and somehow the two images, of snowflakes and the doves, conflated in my mind. I also have a tiny clay dove ornament from Mexico I hang on my tree each year, it's my favorite ornament, so small tucked in among the branches you barely see it unless you know it's there... and it factored into this snowy layering of images, too.

3/15/2006 8:20 PM  
Blogger Soen Joon Sunim said...

(o)

(If I may.)

3/15/2006 9:21 PM  
Blogger Mary said...

There' something about the softness and gentleness of falling snow that ties in so well with the image of a dove. Lovely

3/15/2006 11:43 PM  
Blogger Jean said...

Votre texte est si léger , si délicat ...
Chût ...
On dirait du Verlaine tellement c'est beau !!!!!

3/16/2006 4:31 AM  
Blogger MB said...

soen joon... what a pleasure to have you stop by. Thank you!

Mary, yes, I agree. Featheriness and grace...

Jean, vous me faites grand honneur. J'ai pas eu de temps cette semaine, mais je voudrais bientot ecrire un peu plus en francais. Un jour bientot...

3/16/2006 11:18 AM  
Blogger zhoen said...

What Soen Joon said.

3/16/2006 3:55 PM  
Blogger snowsparkle said...

ok... so how can i be so in love with a poem of so few words? WOW!!!! love it!

3/16/2006 11:05 PM  
Blogger MB said...

Wow is right, Snowsparkle, what a wonderful response! :-)

Word verification: yevlene ...doesn't that sound like someone's name?

3/17/2006 3:04 PM  
Anonymous Vicki.B said...

WOW that is ssssssssssoooooooooooo amasing have you got any other haiku?lol

2/02/2009 9:46 AM  

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